Revised Essay 1-03b: Lilo&Stitch

I watched Lilo & Stitch. I have watched Lilo & Stitch’s many story on TV before. I will write about feelings which I had felt when I watched Lilo & Stitch.I think many important things are described in this story. For example friendship, brotherly love, and so on!!!! Moreover it descrived about Hawaii. When I watched this story, I noticed about the importance of my friends, family. I think this story teach us many important things.

First it described about friendship. Lilo has many friends. They are very nice friends for her. I think Lilo’s best friend is Stitch. Lilo & Stitch often fight!!! But they make up soon. When they make up, they understand why they fought and bad things which Lilo and Stitch did. Moreover they apologized each other obediently. I think it is important to apologize obediently!!!! I can not apologize like them. So I learned this thing from Lilo and Stitch!!!!! Lilo has another friend. Their name is Pricuri and Zyannba. They are very kind!!! Pricuri is a funny man and Zyannba is a kind man. They are good friend too. They are very, very friendly. I have many good friends. So I want to build good friendship with them like Lilo, Stitch, Pricuri and Zyannba. And they always help each other, when they are trouble.

Lilo & Stitch are very friendly. If Lilo or Stitch are in trouble, they help each other!!! I thought there are tie between Lilo and Stitch. They are best friend. When I watched Lilo & Stitch, I thought I want to build good friendship like them.

Second it described about brotherly love. Lilo has a older sister. They often fight but they are very friendly. Lilo loves her older sister. Her older sister loves Lilo too!!! When lilo feels depressed, her older sister cheers up lilo!!! She is kind. I have two sisters. I often fight them too. But I think they are very precious people for me!!! Surely Lilo and her older sister feel same thing. When I watched this story, I thought I have to cherish my sisters. Of course my family and friends!!!

Third it descrived about Hawaii. Lilo danced hula. Hula is hawaii's folk dance. Lilo's friends danced too. When I watched this scene, I felt awesome and want to try to dance hula!!! Because I am interested in Hawaii culture so I have been learned about Hawaii. And some hawaii language descrived. For example, Lilo & Stitch often say "Aloha" or "Ohana" these mean "hello" "Family" in English. I rememberd this word and means.



I want to watch more Lilo & Stitch story.This story really teaches us important things.
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My ipod!!!

I went to Mr. Max with my mother to buy ipod!!! When we got to there and saw ipod, I wavered because there were many colors. I want to green, orange or purple. I was thinking for a long time in front of ipod. Then I decided and I bought green ipod. It was cheap yesterday!!!! I was very satisfied. I want to listen to music with my green ipod soon. But I do not know how to operate ipod and download music from computer so I will be taught by my friend. I am not good at use computer so I do not know if I will able to understand (>_<) But I will do try.
Now my family is on a diet!!! So I joined their exercise today. It was very hard and tired but I think their exercise will effective!!! I will continue their exercise from today. Actually my mother became slim!!! I want to become slim like her!!!!
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Vacation plans***

I am planning to go to Universal Studio Japan in this summer vacation with my local friends. We have been planning this travel about three month ago!!! I have not been to Osaka so I can not wait to go there. I am really looking forward to this travel. So I am saving money and do part-time job!!! I want to go to many places too. Especially I want to join festival. I will go my local festival with my friends. I really like to watch fir works. It is very beautiful. I want to watch many fire works. SO I will go Hitoyoshi to join there festival with my sister!!! I want to play with my local, high school and university friends this vacation.
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Shopping***

I went shopping with my mother and sister. I have been wanted to go shopping since June!!! But I had not much money. So I stood. But I got my salary recently. I went to Diamond city Clair. Clair is near by my house and there holds summer sale now!!! I bought two accessories and five clothes. But total price were very cheap!!! Price was about 7000 yen. Very, very, very cheap. I was surprised. If I have more money, I will go shopping again. Everyone had better go there. I like Clair very much because there are many my favorite clothes and food shops. Moreover it is near from my house. And I received cute shop bag. I often go this clothes shop but when I went there, shop bag changed!!! I thought it very cute!!! I was happy because I often collect cute shop bag. I will use it someday. I had a very good day.
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Book Review**

I read “The shoemaker and the Elves” this time. I chose this book because I was attracted by this book picture. These pictures are very cute!!! And I have read “The shoemaker and the Elves” in Japanese so I wanted to read this in English. This book is written in easy English so I think everyone can read without dictionary. I recommend this book for everyone!!!

There are 4 main characters.
Old shoemaker: he is a shoemaker and has a wife. He was in trouble because he does not earn much money.
Ole shoemaker’s wife: She is a wife. She worries her husband because he works late at night.
Two elves: they came to shoe store at midnight and they made shoes behind the back of shoemakers. They always make shoes very beautifully!!!

Old shoemaker and his wife watched that two elves were making shoes. They thanked them because elves made shoes instead of shoemakers so shoemakers decided to make clothes for two elves. Elves were very pleased!!!

All of four characters were very kind!!! When I read this book, I was impressed by their kindness and I have read “The shoemaker and the Elves” one time but When I read this book again in English, I felt many things. For example kindness, family love!!!
I want to see elves one time!!!
Why don’t you read this book???
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Book Review**

I read “Key Trouble”. I often read this series book but this time I tried to read book which is a little difficult than I have read before. There were many words which difficult and I don’t know so I read with dictionary.

There are many characters.
Kipper: He has a magic key and magic took him a gray world by chance this time. Then he dyed gray color!!!
Gran: she is a Kipper’s grandmother. She is protect Kipper from his parents to parents do not see gray color kipper.
Biff and Chip: they are Kipper’s sibling.

The magic key always appears in this series book. This time too!!! The magic key took Kipper to strange gray world but Kipper wanted to go back home so he banged the magic key!!! Then Kipper dyed gray!!! The magic key was angry at Kipper!!!
Can you think why Kipper’s color came back???

I thought this story is funny and I like Gran. She plays with their grandchildren as if she were a young girl!!! She is energy and cute. And I want the magic key. I want to go many places with the magic key but I do not want to go gray color world like Kipper!!!
I recommend this book for every one.
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Heavy rain!!!

It has been raining since Monday. It was heavy rain today. I really do not like rain because I can not do anything!!! I hope that it will be finish the rainy season early.
I went home, when I ate lunch with my friends. I took a bus and I got sleepy so I slept. But moment later I hit my head against the window!!! I was surprised and very ashamed!!! So I pretended I sleep. I was really ashamed.
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