Revesed Essay: favorite places

I think many people have their favorite places. I have many favorite places, too. When I am there, I can relax with my family, friends and alone. So I feel very good. I often listen to music, watch TV and sleep in my favorite places.

I like my house the best, because I can relax. When I go home, I feel relief. I often watch TV and DVDs, listen to music, study and talk with my family. My family gather common living room and we talk about many things. For example, the day and so on!! I always enjoy talking with them. I have three favorite places in my house.

First is my room. I always listen to music, study, do computer and read magazine. I really like my room. My favorite song is ORION which is sang by Mika Nakashima. There are many things I need. My room is narrow, but I decorated with many cute things. But my room is simple!! I decorate a favorite picture on the wall. I always relax and enjoy.

Second is my bed. I sometimes read magazine and comics. I am comfortable when I am on the bed so I become sleepy soon. And I am often thinking in there.

Third is a sofa. As soon as I go home, I sit there and watch TV. I do not calm without this sofa when I am living room.

I like my grand mother’s house, too. I often do there when I want to think and feel relief. In August and January my cousins gather my grand mother’s house and we enjoy eating and talking. I like these times.


Bus is one of my favorite places. I take a bus to go to school every day for fifty minutes. When I take bus, I become sleepy because bus always shakes. It is comfortable for me. And I can relax in bus.

I like my mother’s car, too. I often watch scene, when I am riding her car. And sometimes listen to music. I always become sleepy in her car.

Clair is my favorite, too. This is located in my town so I often go there and shopping. There are many cute and cool things. My feeling become happy when I am there!!!

I also like gymnasium. When I do to gym, I want to play volleyball or other sports and remember my junior school days, So I feel homesick.

I like my bathroom, too. I like taking a bath. I take a bath for forth minutes every day. When I take a bath, I do not think anything so I can relax and calm.

I think many people can relax in there favorite places!!! I have ten favorite places I explain before. I always relax in my favorite places!!!
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