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Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A
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(See: Note 1, below)
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(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates yyyy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 2-01a (2009.10.07) | 2009.10.13 | |||||||
| 2-01b (2009.10.21) | ||||||||
| 2-02a (2009.11.04) | ||||||||
| 2-02b (2009.11.18) | 0 | |||||||
| 2-03a (2009.12.02) | 13 | |||||||
| 2-03b (2009.12.18/22) | 2009.12.16 | |||||||
| Totals | --- | --- |
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
- [Essay 2-2b: favorite places]
- This essay is best for me. I could not write many paragraph before but to improve this, I write many things. So I could many paragraph and show many my informations to everyone.
- I did not write my experiences in detail before but I could write many my experiences in detail in this essay.
- There were few content in my essay before so I wrote various contents in this essay.
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase | Short titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | 2009.10.14 | 17 | ||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 2009.10. 12 | |||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
2.4. Most comments on: | Short titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | 2009.12.02 | |||
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.1215 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | and I wrote my information | |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- I display recent comments from blog visitors in footer widget because I can see comments after I read my blog.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- When I see my classmate's and other's comments for me, I respond comments as soon as I can.
- When I see comments for me, I learn my improvement points and I improve when I write blog.
3.0. BOOK REVIEWS
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 2-01 | 2009.10.11 | 220 | 0 | |
BR 2-02 | 2009.10.12 | 253 | 0 | |
BR 2-03 | 2009.10.13 | 147 | 0 | |
BR 2-04 | 2009.10.18 | 231 | 0 | |
BR 2-05 | 2009.10.19 | 169 | 0 | |
BR 2-06 | 2009.10.19 | 157 | 0 | |
BR 2-07 | 2009.10.24 | 297 | 0 | |
BR 2-08 | 2009.10.25 | 161 | 0 | |
BR 2-09 | 2009.10.26 | 169 | 0 | |
BR 2-10 | 2009.10.27 | 159 | 0 | |
BR 2-11 | 2009.11.01 | 405 | 0 | |
BR 2-12 | 2009.11.02 | 463 | 0 | |
BR 2-13 | 2009.11.08 | 269 | 0 | |
BR 2-14 | 2009.11.08 | 231 | 0 | |
BR 2-15 | 2009.11.14 | 180 | 0 | |
BR 2-16 | 2009.11.21 | 180 | 0 | |
BR 2-17 | 2009.11.22 | 166 | 0 | |
BR 2-18 | 2009.11.22 | 258 | 0 | |
BR 2-19 | 2009.11.28 | 237 | 0 | |
BR 2-20 | 2009.11.28 | 161 | 0 | |
| BR 2-21 | Camping Adventure | 2009.12.12 | 154 | 0 |
--- | --- | Totals: | 6238 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
- Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- I like "A Christmas Carol" the best because I read this book first and when I read and wrote this book, I felt very happy. This book was very interesting!!
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ||
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ||
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ||
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ||
| 4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar? | ||
| 4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ||
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| 4.3. Links and media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? | ||
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ||
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...I posted many phptos
- ...I changed word's color When I thought it was important.
- ...I changed title to easy to see.
5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).- ...It was very fun for me to read books and write my impression about these books.
- ...It was good for me to write essays because I can learn many words and I can show everyone my experiences and so on.
- ... It was good for me to read and write comments because I can know my improvement points which I should improve and listen classmate's opinion.
6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
- ...I should post more blogs which was written my dairy life.
- ...I have to post blog including photos.
- ...I should more comment on my classmates' blog
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
- The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License.
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
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